提分秘籍来啦~
在写作时,同学们经常会出现句子写不长,短句运用过多,显得太过于琐碎的情况。那怎么样写才会让自己的句子看起来有逼格呢? 今天Gi老师就给大家带来一个写句子的高分秘诀! 增加底层逻辑内容 首先大家准备好纸笔,我们来试着翻译下以下这些句子: 1.市民遭受着疾病 对照完答案,恭喜大家完成翻译~ 接下去,仔细观察下这三句中文,大家会发现其实这三句所要表达的是一个意思,但是第一句到第三句为啥会越来长呢? 这就是Gi老师给大家带来的秘籍——增加底层逻辑内容!简言之,就是中文句子需要更加长一些。 结尾 + such as 那怎么才能把句子变得更长呢?划重点!句子后面附上 such as! 但 such as 也不是什么情况都可以用的。到底什么时候可以用上 such as 呢?我们来看下面两句话: 1. This means that tens of millions of ordinary people around the world can now enjoy the comfort and convenience of private cars and modern household appliances. 2. The convenience of many appliances also means that people are able to enrich their lives and spend time and energy on more important things in life. 第一句话中,整体句意表达很完整,可在最后有一个抽象化的词 — household appliances 第二句话中,最后出现了一个抽象词 — important things 碰到此类型情况的时候,我们就可以加入 such as 来补充细节: 1. This means that tens of millions of ordinary people around the world can now enjoy the comfort and convenience of private cars and modern household appliances, such as dishwasher, washing machine, dryer, and instant pot. 2. The convenience of many appliances also means that people are able to enrich their lives and spend time and energy on more important things in life, such as studying or working on their careers, developing personal interests, spending time with family and friends, or simply relaxing in the comfort of their own homes. 除了这些抽象词,还有哪些词碰到了需要添加 such as 来补充细节呢? 快拿笔记一记!还有activities,endangered species, diseases, resources, problems 等等。 是不是已经有些蠢蠢欲动了? 下次写作文的时候记得用上这个小秘诀, 相信你一定会有质的提升! 我们下期主题再会~ Bye for now~
2.市民遭受着肺部疾病
3.市民遭受着肺部疾病,例如哮喘
答案:
1.suffer from/have disease
2.suffer from/have lung disease
3.suffer from/have lung disease, such as asthma.
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